Reworking the introduction to the minguo community manifesto

Project:website
Component:Manifesto
Category:task
Priority:major
Assigned:augustin
Status:active
Project wiki:Minguo Community Project
Related pages:#111: Introduction
Description

As I mentioned several times in the last few months, I am very interested in re-booting the Minguo Community Manifesto project: http://en.minguo.info/manifesto
Today, the project is in a poor state. The active members represent an interesting range of opinions, albeit with strong areas of agreements. If we were the government, what kind of policies would we come up with? We shall see.

The purpose of this ticket is to discuss how to word and improve the introduction to the manifesto:
http://en.minguo.info/manifesto/introduction

Comments

#1

Component:Wiki» Manifesto

#2

Priority:normal» major

Let's get started with this.
I'd appreciate your feedback.

#3

I've only done slight edits:
http://en.minguo.info/manifesto/introduction
I don't know what else should be changed or added.

What do you all think?